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    Quote Originally Posted by Euryleia View Post
    Thanks so much for the read through and the suggestions, Nikita. I will clear up things in those sections you outlined.

    Rohypnol is a sleeping pill that causes anterograde amnesia ie you can't remember events that occur under the influence of the drug. It is know as the date-rape drug. It is illegal in the US but legal in Mexico. Is this something that is not commonly known? Do you think that I should change the drug to something more common?
    yes, I would change it to 'date rape' drug or something more common. But, the suppository idea is a great touch. I know you'll work it out. It's a great piece.
    You got mail.

    I just noticed all the typos in my edits. If you don't mind, would you highlight your changes in red? Thanks.
    Last edited by Nikita; 06-02-2008 at 06:13 PM. Reason: addition

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