DemonMaster,
I tried to re-read this edited version of the story, closely following pejanon's comments. You didn't do half of the grammar corrections.
Please address the matter.
Nikita
DemonMaster,
I tried to re-read this edited version of the story, closely following pejanon's comments. You didn't do half of the grammar corrections.
Please address the matter.
Nikita
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