That was very good Debbie. Very good indeed. I had no trouble losing myself in your writing. I do have a couple of criticisms though. You start the story from Debbie's point of view. Although written 3rd person, we see what she sees and hear what she hears. After the blindfold goes on that switches to an overall view of all of them. That's not a problem in and of itself, but the flow could have been better I thought. Perhaps a line about how she could imagine what they were doing around her or something to show the reader that the perspective has changed. Also I noticed many phrases used again and again. Throbbing cock and tight little asshole come to mind. In the future try not to fall into that particualr erotic writing trap.

Overall I thought it was great and wonder if you would like to post it in the story contest forum, because I think it would have a shot at the top spot.

I'll send you your next assignment by pm soon.