Hi Eury,

Can I call you Eury? No? OK Euryleia...

Damn, I thought she was gonna be freshly fished from the ocean.
Well so far everyone is staying in character and you’re just teasing us with a little development here and there. Always a good plan for a longer piece to sketch the character out over time, but you need to get the important characteristics out there fast.
Still nice start, you've begun to introduce two of the three characters and one is a mystery. Some do claim the two keys to a good story telling are (Ready, this is a secret so don’t tell) 1, a character to root for, and 2, a compelling mystery to challenge said character.
But enough of that, back to the story at hand. Would you care to introduce the crown prince? Maybe you could or offer a few tantalizing hints to help us delve into the mystery. Not that I want to hurry you along, I'll savor this bit for a while.

Mad Lews