Sorry about the delay

What I like about your writing in general is that you seem always to be looking for a new angle or give the new twist to an established genre.

In this story, there is a ‘style reversal’: the script is written as a narrative and the conversation of movie gods take the form of script. It gives a nice twist to the story. With some smoothing out you would have a GREAT story.

Any serious BDSM production would have a rigger. That person may or may not act in the movie but he would design and usually perform bdsm sequences, especially bondage. You could include that in the story.

God job, You are UP to Level 2. Congratulations.