Quote Originally Posted by StillBehindBlueEyes
Could you explain this a bit more?
I'm not understanding not much spacing.
Thank you.
Rabbit can correct me if I'm wrong here, but I think what he meant was that you have few paragraph breaks in your writing, which can make it harder to read. In forum software like this a standard paragraph is a pain to get because of the lack of formatting, but a skipped line between paragraphs can give the the story a better flow.

Lisa took in a deep breath the strong smell of leather overwhelmed her. She started to look up but a firm hand dug into her hair. “A whore never lifts her eyes unless she is instructed to.”
Lisa felt her eyes narrow and her lips tightened. She might have to whore for a living but she didn’t have to take this crap from anyone. Well, she thought of that stack of money. She could take it and run, leaving that short, pale, joke of a man behind. Joey could just choke on the booze he ladled down his throat. She’d be long gone. He’d never find her.
“Yes ma’am,” she said in a docile voice. She knew how to play this game.
“Hummmm dear, a very quick student.” The man’s deep voice drawled.
Lisa took in a deep breath the strong smell of leather overwhelmed her. She started to look up but a firm hand dug into her hair.

“A whore never lifts her eyes unless she is instructed to.”

Lisa felt her eyes narrow and her lips tightened. She might have to whore for a living but she didn’t have to take this crap from anyone. Well, she thought of that stack of money. She could take it and run, leaving that short, pale, joke of a man behind. Joey could just choke on the booze he ladled down his throat. She’d be long gone. He’d never find her.

“Yes ma’am,” she said in a docile voice. She knew how to play this game.

That's how I would space it out. Again I could be off base about what Rabbit meant, but if I wasn't, hopefully this helps.