I like it. I wonder where she went. To the bathroom, maybe?
Sorry. It's very nice.
I like it. I wonder where she went. To the bathroom, maybe?
Sorry. It's very nice.
When a person posts a poem it is of deep thoughts and feelings.....please remember this next time. Inappropriate posts like this are hurtful.Originally Posted by arwcuw
Greg...it was a great poem...very deep and sincere. Please continue to post your poems.
I thought it was beautiful....thanks for sharing your feelings.
Absolutley.Originally Posted by submissivewife
You've kept it simple while still managing to paint vivid mental images with those lovely pros which I suppose is what good poetry is all about.![]()
You can suck 'em, and suck 'em, and suck 'em, and they never get any smaller. ~ Willy Wonka
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