That was good. The only negative thing I noticed is that you seem to have a habit of writing sentence fragments.

Example:

Kind, thoughtful, respectful, a good provider; and boring in bed.

The above isn't a sentence and you have quite a few of these fragments running throughout the story, but many of them could be argued as technique instead of mistakes. If I were you I would check for these when editing and see if they make sense or not.

Otherwise it was great and I'm moving you up to level 3.