Quote Originally Posted by Polecat
How did I craft the story

First I looked at the picture. She looks very gorgeous, but who is she, andhow did she get into this predicament?
So I decided she was Oriental since I kind of like oriental women, but her tits did not look oriental, so I made her Chinese-Puerto Rican. As a matter of fact, I made her a 27 year old, 5'2" 117 Lbs interior designer. Also her father met her mother in Nam. (All of this has nothing to do with the story of course, but I did not know this at the time of crafting the character)

Then I had to get her into her predicament. How would a young, attractive, successful interior designer find herself tied up to a bamboo frame, with ice cold water pouring over her?

Get her toasted, and get her to lose a bet.

What would be original is to make the bet be a chess game.

I could have been more specific on the actual chess game but a) my chess set is in storage and b) nobody on this site cares about chess anyway.

I decided to end it after the shower, because Jose is a nerd anyway, so obviously he doesn't know what to do with a woman; Does he?

I must say not quite what I was expecting---very good all the same


you next task is to read a story

Sending Her To The Edge by Sybriate D'anguisette

http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/s...p?storyid=1647

Then review it both on the story page and in the
Critic's Circle forum

using this as a guidline for the review

Review writing made easy:

http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/forums/showthread.php?t=5386