Try starting with a discription of the father and what his debt was, and the deal done to pay of the debt, then a discription of the neighbours and finally the girl. The story must be in your mind to even think about writing the story in the first place. If this is so, then as i have told others, write a list of who is going to be in the story, and where they will come into it. Write a list of the sections by writing a sentence belonging to that chapter of where the story is leading to and where it might end. Keep the reader expecting more and looking for the next page, dont be afraid to use love or humour, they do work in the correct places, but a lot of BDSM writers seem to forget this aspect of life.

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