A story can start with anything… what is your first scene? How does your character find out about the debt? Does her Dad plead with her to do this for the family? Does she find out when she’s kidnapped? Is the Dad extremely dominant and calls her into the room to meet the neighbor? Does he take her over to the house to hand her over? Is she forced or does she go willingly, feeling it’s her responsibility to save her home.

Titles… I’d have to think about it…

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