Quote Originally Posted by lucy View Post
Looking at about 90% of the stories on the library, I very much hope that they are fantasies, too
Touche, what I meant was that I write in a fantasy setting (magic, wizards, witches etc) so my writing cannot be considered set in a realistic situation. Even my actual sex scenes require a little suspension of belief (Part A rarely fits as easily in Slot B as I describe and few woman, I'm sure could enjoy anal sex as much as my protagonists :P )

Thanks Venom for the critique, I'm an amateur so I usually write first pass and I'm too much in a rush to write the next scene (My muse is one demanding mistress) to consider my grammar. Yes I now notice how I tend to double full stop after speech in sentences, something I will have to look out for ;-)

So serious it is without scat. Thank you once again for the feedback, I will hopefully start posting tonight.