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    Did you cum?

    Quote Originally Posted by StillBehindBlueEyes
    I guess I don't actually see myself selling my work here. I was chatting with H Dean the other day, (we know what side of this issue he is on.) I realized my question for the reader is not was it correct grammatically, it's did you get a thrill, did you cum?.
    And herein lies the crux of the matter. But who can cum when they have to review multiple lines in a story just to get the gist? Who can cum when the errors are so frequent that one begins looking for the mistakes?

    That's the stuff that bugs me. If the errors make me lose the mood it ain't good. That sort of thing can only come from laziness and I cannot respect that or offer encouragement, unless it is clearly due to the author writing in a language foreign to them.
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    Ok I see the point when it's put that way.

    Quote Originally Posted by H Dean
    And herein lies the crux of the matter. But who can cum when they have to review multiple lines in a story just to get the gist? Who can cum when the errors are so frequent that one begins looking for the mistakes?
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    I so hate it when he's right but I'm still not asking Mom to edit my porn.

    I really can see the point and on my smaller works have had no complaints that I can remember. I love the idea from her_Joe
    But I've found that I can catch most of them by reading the story in reverse, one sentence at a time.
    I'm going to try that on the vanilla stuff first.
    So if you read my stuff and the grammar drives you nuts forgive me. Maddie is editing it for me piece by piece and I'll post it when she's done. (Thanks again Maddie)
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    Quote Originally Posted by H Dean
    And herein lies the crux of the matter. But who can cum when they have to review multiple lines in a story just to get the gist? Who can cum when the errors are so frequent that one begins looking for the mistakes?

    That's the stuff that bugs me. If the errors make me lose the mood it ain't good. That sort of thing can only come from laziness and I cannot respect that or offer encouragement, unless it is clearly due to the author writing in a language foreign to them.
    I too have to agree with this, especially as I am working on a story with H Dean at the moment! I know it will be a very well edited story.

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