Luckily, I had built a great rapport with my customers and yes, they all DID think it was hilarious...Originally Posted by Widget
You can be sure I never made that mistake again!
Luckily, I had built a great rapport with my customers and yes, they all DID think it was hilarious...Originally Posted by Widget
You can be sure I never made that mistake again!
Naw...still in the industry, just not there anymore.Originally Posted by Dick the Slaver
Awwww.... I assure you my intentions are (almost) always honorable.Originally Posted by His Slut
Determining when they aren't is left as an exercise to the reader. However, I am always nice to newbies.![]()
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There goes the neighborhood!Originally Posted by Rabbit1
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Thanks H Dean, I would be insulted...... if I didn't know you better.Originally Posted by H Dean
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I never claimed not to be a bit rotten.Originally Posted by Aussiegirl1
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Don't get wise, black and blue eyes!Originally Posted by StillBehindBlueEyes
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That is true, but luckily for me, there is a lot of sweetness there too!Originally Posted by H Dean
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No, must have missed that bit. Who knows what else could be hidden in that fine print!Originally Posted by StillBehindBlueEyes
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Originally Posted by H Dean
Looks like you're in trouble now Mr. Dean....![]()
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Is anyone buying this?
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I'm afraid not, H Dean.
Nope, I'm not buying it either! Good try though!
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I do think that spelling and grammar are important, simply because they make any piece of writing flow better. I also think correct word usage is important both for clarity and flow. Punctuation is also important.....
All this said I have read stories, and posts, on sites elsewhere, which have been lacking in all these and still been damned good stories.
I am aware that my writing is frequently imperfect so I try not to criticise even if something does grate on me.
I think what annoys me more are the people who either criticise others and yet dont try themselves , or who are scathing of others minor mistakes while often making major ones themselves.
One point I would make is that dictionaries are a good helpmate, but you do have to have a basic idea of how the word is spelled in order to look it up.
There's many a slip twixt hand and lip.
AKA. little mischievous one.
Vote for or against a code for poetry on the main story site here.....http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/forums/showthread.php?t=6459
Small issues can be forgotten when it compares to the overall interest in a story, however i think the reason why its good to correct oneself is because those errors take away from the reading experience.. and in the end youre cheating yourself and the readers because its a distraction, and when a reader is distracted you dont quite get the credit you deserve.
Generally I dont think its a major issue when I'm reading a story But it /can/ be an issue when there are enough mistakes that one can't entirely focus on the story he/she is reading.
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"I do think that spelling and grammar are important, simply because they make any piece of writing flow better. I also think correct word usage is important both for clarity and flow. Punctuation is also important....."
More than (4) elipesies(sp?) aside, I do agree with the grammatical comments made by Ladywrites.
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[QUOTE=Daes]...errors take away from the reading experience.. and in the end youre cheating yourself and the readers because its a distraction, and when a reader is distracted you dont quite get the credit you deserve...QUOTE]
I disagree - if your piece is error laden you do tend to get the "credit" you deserve. You just don't like it, usually.
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[QUOTE=H Dean]Makes me think of a tall teacher slapping a ruler in his palm looking down at me with an evil glint in his eyes.Originally Posted by Daes
well ---I also look at ---do real people really speak with perfect grammar?
I do not think that mentioning bad grammar is a bad thing --if done in a constructive mannar---but to say a story is ruined by a few grammar errors or spelling mistakes ---or typos---and I know typos well as I type kind of funny ----
I think instead of rating a story real low because of this ---we could encourage the writer---by using our skills ---and just gently point out it could have been better if the grammar and spelling or typos were corrected
I know I published one of my early stories ---yes there was some grammar errors and a spelling mistake or two ---this story was publised on many different story sites ---funny how none of the others even mentioned grammar or spelling errors----it is a sex story for gods sake not Gone With the Wind ---lol
Are we expecting too much for free?
I also agree, Sbbe, lol. While I might be expecting perfection from myself, I certainly don't with other people's work here. It's a bonus, but not a requirement.![]()
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Originally Posted by Silke
Well it is rare that you will find perfection in a new author----like drawing more flys with honey ---you will get better storys with kind but honest reviews----If I had published my first story here ---I can tell you ---I never would have published another story again ---brutal reviews is not the way to get more or better stories
Yeah, and I see it from my own perspective...THEY at least have the guts to publish and face the reviews. With my own fucked up standards I'll never get there, lol. So, three cheers for the brave authors out there.Well it is rare that you will find perfection in a new author----like drawing more flys with honey ---you will get better storys with kind but honest reviews----If I had published my first story here ---I can tell you ---I never would have published another story again ---brutal reviews is not the way to get more or better stories![]()
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- If you wish to travel far and fast, travel light.
Take off all your envies, jealousies, unforgiveness, selfishness and fears. -
Glenn Clark
yes when you publish your first story ---your heart is in your throat ---you have not yet learned to write for yourself not for others ---if they enjoy it fine if not oh well ----funny thing about my stories and the reviews is I got paid for both stories----must have done something right ---and wait until you have a novel published ---and the printer makes a typo ---your readers have paid good money for your book and there is the typo ---guess what the printer does not correct it until the next printing ---lol
oh god and then there are the people that can not resist pointing out minor errors like that too. grrr.
Originally Posted by Widget
Love get used to it ---as there are always people who do that in real life too---not just in the stories you write---There seems to be those who know it all ---that think they do not make errors --even minor ones---
but a wise man once told me ---if you don't make mistakes ---it's because you ain't doing nothing----hows that for proper grammar? lol
Woooooa could that be how real people talk
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