Thanks Severusmax,

That was very good. I liked the background imformation you provided for the girls, it really gave me a good insight into their characters. Your spelling and grammer was very good also.

The only thing I would watch is having too much conversation from each girl in one paragraph. Maybe break the conversation down a bit and include some of the reactions and feelings of each girl. Please don't take this as a negative as you really did a great job.

I am happy to send you up to the next level.

Aussiegirl