this was very good!

In the begining...I felt as though you moved a little quickly....try to go a little slower build more anticipation.

We can read your reactions...sometimes you can even feel them with the proper wording...Here's what I mean.


Panic fills me and I struggle against the restraints. I try to see but a blindfold keeps my world black. I lay there naked, bound and unable to see. The kind of vulnerable feeling I usually enjoy.
Panic fills me and I struggle against the restraints. Whimpering I try to see but a blindfold keeps my world black. I lay naked, exposed, bound, and unable to see. Vulnerable to his administrations. The kind of vulnerable feeling I usually enjoy.


With that said he then thrust three of his fingers is my wet pussy. SHIT now he knew that this was turning me on. My body had let me down and he now knew how excited I was about being so helpless and vulnerable.
With that said, he thrust three fingers in my wet pussy. Whimpering helplessly to my reaction to his attach I think "Shit, now he knew I was turned on."

This lets the reader know that you are helpless and vulnerable. Making helpless sounds, help to drive the point that you are untterly exposed and vulnerable to your attacher.

I'll send you your next assignment soon.

SB