I am replying to Fox’s comments and won't copy them here.

No I do not want to ‘out’ anyone that is why I know that I must change the names. The device of 55555 is made possible by a function of word processors and would let the reader fill in any name they liked - singer, actor, high school sweetheart or wife.

None of the story is based on anything real except my own experience with a professional dominant.

I know that I am preaching to the converted here, but it is here in this wonderful spot, the BDSMlibrary site that I am finding the tools to make it better and perhaps good enough for publication.

That last perhaps is just another fantasy.