Black And Blue

[Violenteer]

Black and blue.
Being with you is like that too.
Cold and hard
The heat in the steel.
The animal in the leather.
Forged in the heat and bondage.
The anodized marks on the skin.
Chocolate tear stained eyes that look above.
More my master.
More!
I promise you!
So we battle the boundaries.
One moment of pain,
A shared term of eternity.
Take it in.
Take it all.
Plead, and give.
Give, and plead.
Worship me.
The way I worship you.
Push.
So that I may find you.

[Timberwolf]

Very interesting piece.

[Talia]

yes interesting indeed. Thanks for sharing.

[poetic_justice]

Nicely put, thankyou.

[pinkme]

loved it

[frankee]

WOW! That was great Violenteer

[ElectricBadger]

Really nice, well done! I loved the images...."Chocolate tear'....

[gagged_Louise]

Very good, Violenteer, I like the stark quality of it.

[Echoes]

[QUOTE=Violenteer;103668]

Cold and hard
The heat in the steel.
The animal in the leather.
Forged in the heat and bondage.

QUOTE]

very nicely done

[slaveangel{HM}]

Wow... *applaudes* A wonderful piece! Am surprised that I missed it earlier. Well done.

[Violenteer]

hi everyone,

i have not been around for a while....so thankyou!

[TheDeSade]

very nice. great images and an interesting flow to the whole piece. Have you considered entering it in the January Poetry Contest? I think you should!