Hi. Sorry I didn't respond sooner, but for some reason I don't receive notifications from this board, so I just stumbled on your pm by accident. Your story has progressed significantly since you made the offer to forward chapter two, so presumably you're no longer in need of commentary. If you just wish to converse, my public e-mail address is: curtis3331@yahoo.com.
hiya - thanks for the comment. Send me your email addr and I'll send chapter 2, interested in your comments. YES, I'm trying to get more psychological, get into her head, so thanks.