You are quite welcome, thank you for taking the time to read it.
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You are quite welcome, thank you for taking the time to read it.
I tread this path of thorns, endlessly, marching relentlessly,
Feet bleeding, each step a tragedy, aching in agony.
How much further do I have to go? I don't know.
From birth to death, a cycle...
The beauty of poetry is in how it speaks to different people in different ways. For me it was a picture of my mental state at the time that I wrote it, there were so many things going on in my head...
Ah, alright. Wasn't meant to be a shout out to Radiohead, but I do like the band, so.. I am not ashamed.
This is beautiful. The love and pain that you feel shine through.
Thank you... though I confess I'm not even sure which Radiohead song I quoted... but I am very glad you liked it.
Lol, thank you Z-girl. Good to know that my writing is as effective as a ballg-gag.
You are quite welcome. And thank you for taking the time to respond.
Introduction
The first story I posted, A Lesson for Lilah, purposefully left out certain details and elements. In many ways, it is to be considered 'the middle' of the story. The Lilah Project...
One of the elements of my life that had been, for so long, a thorn in my side recently has been resolved. You see, I am a doleramancer, or in the vulgar argot, a practitioner of pain magick. While...
No, thank you. I am glad you liked it.
Thank you so much. Sometimes I look at my body of work and feel like it would better suited in crayon on construction paper, but I suppose we are all our own worst critics.
It actually was intended to have a fast paced meter... I actually performed this poem 'slam style' at a poetry meet in Colo Springs last year.
If that means you liked it, then thank you very much.
this!!!
Excellent free flowing imagery. Thank you.
Volatile, some elements for the hell of it tossed into a pile.
Reaction, fate randomly acting, subtly fracturing,
Combine at the fringes, where the hinge is, where I begin and you end is,...
I'm transforming into this chunk of ice, which I despise,
With all the bitterness and anger on the rise, about all the lies.
Mine, hers, and all the opinions in between, added to the heat,
Of the...
Then I'll make sure to mention my dagger collection and my Sweeny Todd replica straight razors.
Set sail my loves! Set your hearts to the horizon!
Show your hair to the wind and don't look back.
Keep your eyes fixed on the waves up ahead,
Lest they be tall, with force.
Hoist anchor my...
The girl, the mortal this tiny thing comes to me,
To entreat My heart, to make a plea,
"Save my people, and i will be Yours!"
As if I could not take her by force.
My brother, the Darkness, has...
Don't look too closely, I don't want you to see,
The darkness that bubbles and churns inside me,
Instead pay heed to my armor, how it gleams,
With untarnished shine, or so it seems.
Don't peer...
Be still my love, for this is real,
Behold my gleaming razor steel,
Keep your legs apart just like that,
And try not to quiver as the flat,
Of the blade caresses your hot skin.
The cold metal...