Thank yo both! Since the environment in the story is pretty controlled, all of his health parameters including weight and body composition are known to his captor, I might go with an precise oral...
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Thank yo both! Since the environment in the story is pretty controlled, all of his health parameters including weight and body composition are known to his captor, I might go with an precise oral...
I have no marijuana experience, thus the question.
Does a mild smoked or eaten dose of pot actually relax someone who is not a regular user?
In the story, a new-half captor, Fiona, is spending...
For what it's worth, I agree with all who say "do whatever you want in fiction." It is fiction and nobody should take it as reality. historical or not. I am working on a non-fiction book right now...
Don't forget CreateSpace.Com for paperbacks. They have an option to publish free, print on demand, set your own price. Or you can pay the setup charge for a greater royalty.
I see it as a multi-edged sword. On the technical front, that is losing importance, publishing by chapter allows a reader to see if they like it without downloading the whole thing. Still relevant...
If your story is in a time period before the 1970s, "Ms." did not exist then and should be avoided for period accuracy.
My editor as in the guy who reads all my commercial stuff and decides if it is getting published or not where he works.
In American English it has always been Misses during my young life.
Bah, it past my editor.
Just taking a wild stab at this, you want everybody to know you are available?
Trust me. When my stories get past basic restraints and erotic bondage, it is all fiction vs. reality.
I know this is the wrong thread, but thought I would pass on that my newly assigned editor at FemDomCave.Com uses italics for thought, rather than single quotes. Someone around here mentioned that...
Just as an example:
Looks better as:
“If you’re so eager, why don’t you come hump my boot?”
I froze, completely caught off guard, contemplating the seriousness of her tone. I wasn’t able...
Ashley Zacharias, hands down, is my favorite. She writes a great story and has some great mind theater to enhance the basic, solid story. "The Middle Manager" is my current favorite of hers.
Thank you Torq!
"Controlling Sarah" Part 11:
http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/chapter.php?storyid=8817&chapterid=27592
This is the first part that I wrote solo, with much appreciated help from two...
Great collaboration you two!
Just uploaded a new chapter (almost 5,000 words) and new author's notes to Controlling Sarah. Will update here when it is available in the library.
Best would be if you have read "Controlling Sarah" in the Library. Looking for someone to edit with an eye for taking that story commercial. Editing for this site is good too, would like to improve...
"Controlling Sarah" is sitting at #7 here:
http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/list.php?pos=0&sortby1=currenthit&arrange1=DESC
How often do stories move up that quickly here? It got uploaded five...
Over 2,900 readers and one review of Suki II: Sunshine Returns in the first month http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/story.php?storyid=8752 my first submission on this site and it was my second...
The cover for this one will be posted here when ready: http://sukisstreet.blogspot.com/2010/12/new-cover-for-controlling-sarah.html
True! Thank you. I see someone already reviewed too.
Looks like everything is okay, other than those goofy symbols that MS Word uses as quotes that are not compatible to many other programs and show up as black diamonds with a question mark inside.
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I like your stylistic experiment, but maybe you should warn the reader with a note at the beginning of the story? I prefer to use single quotes and a "thought tag" before or after. Haven't gotten...