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  1. #1
    watchful
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    Burning for You

    work in progress...let me know what you think. Thanks.

    Bodies thrusting
    Hot sweat
    Touch me
    I burn for You
    Your lips are cruel
    Your hands divine
    You touch my soul
    Like no other
    I am so weak
    In Your embrace
    You overpower me
    And take me again
    Harder, faster
    Deeper, more
    Push me to my limits
    Take Your pleasure in me
    I am Yours
    Body and soul
    * * sprinkling sparkly faerie dust * *

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    Nice work Jade. I suppose it needs polishing, but do not know enough about poetry to say where. I do know I liked it.

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    Rhabbi

    Thanks, i'm glad you liked it.
    * * sprinkling sparkly faerie dust * *

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