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  1. 09-27-2006 #1
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    Question one must learn

    A haiku

    Fear not the master
    The whip only stings to teach
    absents is your fear

    This would be my first try on a haiku, please let me now how to better it.
    I’m not sure its erotic but ehh depends how you decipher it.
    "all that we may see or seem is but a dream within a dream" William shakespeare

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    The whip only stings to teach
    (absence/absent) is your fear...


    I really love this haiku poem. Strong message and lesson.
    Thanks for sharing.
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    I do like this...very good. I can't think of anything I would change except what incredulous pointed out.

    Keep going with this.
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