Can you hear my cry?

[DemonGoddess]

I wanted to tell you;
Pick me. Chose me. Want me. Love ME!
But instead I said;
I love you; So I'm letting you go.

But here's the thing
I never really let you go.
I lost you for a hope
Hope that a broken promise would be unbroken.

Seeing you again brought it all back.
What we had
What we were.
What we could have been.

I didn't know what I was giving up
But by time I did you were gone.
having chosen another.
Loving someone who isn't me.

And I was left alone
with a memory
A dream
and the broken promise of a dead man.

Silently I'm still whispering
Pick me. Chose me. Want me. Love ME!
But no one is listening

[TheDeSade]

Nice, speaks volumes.

[moptop]

Desolate.

[Talia]

I lost you for a hope

This line really stuck out for me.

I hear you hun. I hear your pain.

[Echoes]

I love you; So I'm letting you go.

I lost you for a hope
Hope that a broken promise would be unbroken.

And I was left alone

Silently I'm still whispering
But no one is listening

this speaks so much and is most profound
*soft hugs*

[slaveangel{HM}]

Wow....it is as if I am looking in a mirror as I read these words. *wipes eyes*

Well written, thankyou for sharing xx. *hugs*