A Fantasy of Mine: Taken by A Cruel Couple

[KateHeld]

One of my fantasies is that while on vacation, I meet an older couple. First I'm pleased with their company but it keeps getting annoying with the way, it seems, they're following me almost everywhere. I'm tricked into come to their room and drugged ( I struggle to no avail ). Then I'm tightly bound, gagged, blindfolded and they do cruel things to me; waxing my body, humiliating and giving me pain and forced orgasms and more pain ( with predicament bondage ). I keep fighting but they break my free spirit after a while.

They get all of this on video and I'm later used as a footstool as they watch the film of me being dominated.

Whenever they want me out of the way, I'm drugged and kept in the closet or at their feet on the bed. When they leave for shopping, breakfast etc. I'm left all bound and gagged with butt and ear plugs and a dildo, locked in a trunk. Then when they come back, it begins all over again. The woman is so cruel, she makes me clean her shoes and feet with my tongue as she keeps abusing my rear. She loves to pull at my leash as I complete the forced task, any wrong move and she punishes me as the man keeps watching.

Later I'm stuffed in a suitcase and we leave the hotel, as I'm kidnapped in broad daylight. I'm taken to their yacht and ketp as their slave/ pet.

[Euryleia]

Gracious, it sounds like you should expand on that (what they're saying to you, etc) and write it up to post it to the library. Keep the first person point of view and include your thoughts as they work to break you and then to keep you. You've got a good idea here and I, for one, would like to see it completed.
ER

[KateHeld]

Euryleia, thank you. I'm glad you like it.
Hmmm... also thanks for the advice, sounds great. I might give it a try after all.

[Alex Bragi]

I agree with ER, you should expand on this hotter than hot fantasy. And, yes, certainly keep it in the first person--that will give it that edgy feeling of being real but please, unless you're feeling very confident and brave, don't do it in present tense.

[gagged_Louise]

Wow yes, there's stuff for several stories here. I agree with Alex, stick to first person (but not present tense) and focus it on your feelings of helplessness, arousal, peril and shame rather than getting stuck in intricate description of the ropework and gags etc. If you were really stuck in that kind of situation you wouldn't retain an accurate memory of exactly how you'd been tied; the overload, blunt shock and overwhelming sense of being used and objectified is what would dominate your feelings,


Stuffed in a suitcase? How about the car boot? hogtied and gagged, of course...mmmmgh...

[fantazmaster]

Kateheld,I do admire your creativity and ability to express this story idea of yours.I am going to concur that certainly with only three characters being the major players that first person would be a comfortable fit for this story .Third person would of course work better if there were more characters and more of the "..meanwhile back at the ranch" settings.

I can envision your having lots of room to develop this story with perhaps some underlying currents between the man and wife surfacing as this captivity of yours at the hands progresses.Perhaps the wife is jealous of you as presumably you are younger than she is,thus her cruelty towards you throughout your time
under the control of the couple.To add to the fires of resentment perhaps you remind the husband of either the wife in her younger years or another from his past.All motivations here for the wife's cruelty to be honed to a razor's edge.

Has this couple done this to other women in recent years.If yes then they have some experience in this area,and use this experience to leverage ever tighter control over you ,not only physically but from a psychological standpoint as well.The situation you describe here would be a prime scene for
information control as well as physical confinements.As time goes by,you find being isolated by the couple's confinement,that you become insatiably hungry
for news and information.The couple realizing that you are totally dependent on them for news and info from the outside,allow you to see,hear and perhaps read only those things that would reinforce their control of you.
Lots to work with here and I do hope you will write this story as it indeed sounds like a very enjoyable story.

[Mr. Veide]

The wife is jealous of you and she sees a way of putting you in your place by making you her slave.
Reducing you to a fuck-toy means her husband will never see you as anything more than a little fuck pet. She encourages him to fuck you mercilessly, and tells him that you are her gift to him.

She spanks you and abuses you, but also binds you, legs wide open, and examines your cunt and asshole. One of her objectives is to have complete control of your cunt. So not only is there abuse, but also cruel sexual manipulation of your body. You are ball-gagged at all times except when you are needed for cock-sucking.

[Warbaby1943]

Sounds like a great start to a story. Hope to see more of it.

[KateHeld]

Alex, Louise, Fantazmaster, Mr.Veide and Warbaby, thank you all for your support and pointers. I'm glad you all like it. Those tips are most helplful.

[fantazmaster]

Glad you liked them.are you going to develop this one into a story ?

[KateHeld]

This was only a fantasy for me but you guys and gals ( thank you all ) encouraged me so I'll write it as a story in the near future.

[fantazmaster]

Ah ,very glad to hear this news, kateheld!You may well discover that writing this fantasy in story form will lead to new ideas as you develop the story.

This was only a fantasy for me but you guys and gals ( thank you all ) encouraged me so I'll write it as a story in the near future.

[KateHeld]

Ah ,very glad to hear this news, kateheld!You may well discover that writing this fantasy in story form will lead to new ideas as you develop the story.

You are right FMaster. Actually I'm already thinking about a million different things about the story as I'm making an outline.

[Tallyman]

All I'd say is that I'd definitely read it.

[sharkshark]

[QUOTE=KateHeld;466028]One of my fantasies is that while on vacation, I meet an older couple. First I'm pleased with their company but it keeps getting annoying with the way, it seems, they're following me almost everywhere. I'm tricked into come to their room and drugged ( I struggle to no avail ). Then I'm tightly bound, gagged, blindfolded and they do cruel things to me; waxing my body, humiliating and giving me pain and forced orgasms and more pain ( with predicament bondage ). I keep fighting but they break my free spirit after a while.



very nice...lter the womn calls your elderly mother. She has coverstion with her as you eat her pussy.

[slaveboy 6]

Great fantasy!

My favorite one is that I'm taken captive on an island ruled by women where I am totally enslaved.