For lily26: Limits

**elyse** · 10-07-2006

Lily26 requested that her poem contain the words:
squirm
forbidden
whimper

LIMITS

He holds her gaze,
waiting patiently
for the knowledge
to dawn in her trusting eyes:

that she is His, now
and He will wring from her
every whimper
every moan,
every helpless, futile
squirm
with consummate, careless ease.

HIs patience is rewarded
her eyes widen
her breath quickens
at the realization
that every
single
act
that she has not forbidden Him
now awaits her.

**Timberwolf** · 10-07-2006

"her breath quickens
at the realization
that every
single
act
that she has not forbidden Him
now awaits her."

Lily, you asked the other day what do Doms get out of submission, there's a pretty fine answer.

As usual elyse, you have done a wonderful job, and given us somethign quite entertaining to read.

**elyse** · 10-07-2006

Originally Posted by Timberwolf

Lily, you asked the other day what do Doms get out of submission, there's a pretty fine answer.

As usual elyse, you have done a wonderful job, and given us somethign quite entertaining to read.

thank you! i really hope lily likes it!

**Panplayer** · 10-07-2006

I have now had the pleasure of reading some of what you have written. If I ever have the pleasure of writing anything with you, I will have to be far more complex and imaginative to at all amuse you.

**slaveangel{HM}** · 10-07-2006

Wow! What a breathtaking poem! Wonderful!

**elyse** · 10-07-2006

thank you! i've never had a poem called breathtaking before

**frankee** · 10-07-2006

elyse,

As always...your writing captivates the mind and the heart.

Mack_Bolan{lily} · 10-07-2006

Hmmm this poem is indeed beautiful, not unlike lily's spirit. I'm sure she will read this and be thrilled.

I loved it elyse, you are truly talented and I think lily will love it too.

**Aussiegirl1** · 10-08-2006

That really is a beautiful poem! Well done.

**lily27** · 10-09-2006

Wow, elyse this is my favourite of your work thus far (and that is saying a lot!). I just love it!

Not only did you use the words I gave you, you managed to completely encapsulate how I have been feeling lately as well.

Thank you!!

Originally Posted by Mack_Bolan

Hmmm this poem is indeed beautiful, not unlike lily's spirit.

*blushes and smiles*

**Curious_1** · 10-09-2006

I loved it elyse!

**sparkler** · 10-09-2006

wonderful elyse

**Woogsbie** · 10-11-2006

*hats off to the poet*

nicely done, elyse!

*off to read more*

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