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    Beauty

    Her gentle hand traces patterns on your thigh
    The long delicate fingers
    Against pale, smooth skin
    Nails grating lightly, with their happiness.

    You close your dark deep eyes
    To the comforting warm nights darkness,
    And feel the silken hair, flowing past her shoulders
    Listening, silent, to the soft sigh from her full lips.

    A seductive shiver, courses through your flesh
    And you smile, with the heat of her small body against your own,
    While your long black nails, lovingly caress
    Her smooth, cool, olive skin.

    Your warm lips softly trace along her neck,
    Biting at her ear, as she trembles against your chest,
    While your fingers trace the delicate beauty
    Of her breasts as she rests against your body.

    And in that protecting darkness
    While the world closes its eyes to the unknown,
    You hold this treasure to your body
    And whisper kindness to her heart.

    Your pale fingers travel lower,
    As she closes those dark eyes
    And you smile against her hair, and whisper
    When her thighs, full and warm, part slowly to your hand.

    Your heart warms with this trust
    As you feel her heat and wetness against your gentle fingers,
    The passionate gasp from her soft lips
    As you whisper love and honour to her soul.

    And while her body arches, and her nails dig to your thighs
    To old and memorable scars,
    You close your eyes, and feel that release
    And know you will never hurt her.

    copyright © Tracey Cobb
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    Very nice.. . . . well done
    “Love is that condition in which the happiness of another person is essential to your own...
    Robert A. Heinlein, Friday

    To my darling Lady. It is your happiness that I seek more than anything else. To see you happy is reward enough. I Love you.

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    Thankyou
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    Awesome.

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    And in that protecting darkness
    While the world closes its eyes to the unknown,
    You hold this treasure to your body
    And whisper kindness to her heart.


    I liked this stanza in particular. The concept of protecting darkness intrigues me. Most people don't think of darkness as protecting.

    Thank you again for sharing
    “Love is that condition in which the happiness of another person is essential to your own...
    Robert A. Heinlein, Friday

    To my darling Lady. It is your happiness that I seek more than anything else. To see you happy is reward enough. I Love you.

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    That was amazing pj!!! Loved it!!

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    Sir_G - Thankyou for the positive reinforcement

    Again, Thankyou TDS for your thoughts. These comments are a great help in my continued writing. I think in some way the darkness is protecting, or at least, it always has been for me. I always felt safe in the dark, like a strange kind of ethereal blanket drawing you close and shutting out prying eyes and harsh actions...

    Thankyou frankee, I always enjoy hearing that people have liked my work.

    It really does mean a lot to me, guys.
    Last edited by poetic_justice; 11-22-2006 at 09:32 PM.
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    As always, I find your writing enchanting.
    Mit diesem Herz hab ich die Macht
    die Augenlider zu erpressen
    ich singe bis der Tag erwacht
    ein heller Schein am Firmament
    Mein Herz brennt

    - Rammstein

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    Thankyou Timberwolf, that means a lot coming from you.
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    I really really love this poem sweetie *hugs tight*

    I too find comfort in the dark. You expressed it so well.

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