what is this?

[Echoes]

what is this feeling, safe?
Is it strong arms around me
surrounding in embrace?
Is it a soft as look,
fluttered caress,
stroke of face?
A shield, body
covering mine?
What is this feeling,
this…

a questing of something
I do not know,
endeavored sensation
just beyond my reach.
Untouchable,
unexplainable,
indescribable,
so how can one learn
what is missed
yet has not felt?

[TheDeSade]

Well. . . you are on a roll tonight! ANother winner. . . .

(check this line stoke of face?

should that be stroke?)

[Echoes]

thank you TDS, yes it was a spelling mistake

[moptop]

Hiya hun - FINALLY get round to being able to read your posts! I won't gush, because you know I love your writing, just to say that this starts with a soft and whimsical sound and rythm, which seems to flow with the thoughts of safety, calm, and then you change the rythm to be more- oh, what, intransigent, not soft - as you question and show your own seeking, a sense of frustration coming in. Well, hey, I guess I'm gushing a bit again.

"Is it a soft as look,"

doesn't make sense in English, I think - "Is it a soft look", "Is it as soft as a look" - make sense to me, maybe I'm not understanding?

[Echoes]

wups thank you moptop, I do have to be careful of placement of words oftentimes thinking backwards.
soft hugs

[Guest 91108]

I like it Echoes. thanks for sharing.

[Echoes]

Thank you for your kind words Wolf

[Valkyrie402]

Different..... I like it very much.