Praise, Comments, or Suggestions for the New Lord Mobius's Dungeon

[Darkgirl]

Thanks Ruby for the comment before. Though I do find it hard sometimes to put down on paper (or computer) my ideas sometimes, I do have a MASSIVE imagination.
My character is as you have now found is a vampire....but with a difference!!!
Darkgirl has never been bitten - born a vamp means that she's limited with only half vampire powers. Darkgirl has only ever fed upon the criminals of society but is yet to be tamed and taught to use the powers available. To be bitten for the first time by another vamp means the unleach of a stronger character. But before this happens the only way to tame her is to brake her till she becomes a slave then trained to be dominant at her masters/misstresses will. Does this sound ok????!!!??? :-[

[Mastermike]

Hey Ruby

I am a new Master trying to figure what type of master I am. I am kinda laid back and if you upset me I can be harsh and trying to harness when to do what so to speak.

[BabySub]

Hmm, I'll have to think on the character building thing. I would like BabySub to be something a little more, but I need to think on it a little. :: plots :: Will get back to you guys.

Sorry for absense, busy and yucky... I'll get back into it all soon. Keep up the awesome work guys, I'm loving reading it all, as always.

[Microwave0ven]

I roleplay on other sites, and one of them has this really detailed form that while you don't have to fill it all out, it provokes thought about your character, and that sorta thing. I'm sure it could be edited or changed to better fit the Dungeons.

Also, a link that sorta has interesting ideas for character-building: http://hollylisle.com/fm/Articles/wc2-2.html

Character Bio Form

Player Info

Name of Player:
Email Used:

Character Info

Name:

Sex:

Age:

Race:

Height:

Weight:

Voice:

Hair Color:

Eye Color:

Complexion:

Build:

Tattoos/Piercings/Scars/Birthmarks:

Sexual Preference:

Fantasy:

Strengths:

Weaknesses:

Odd Quirks (if applicable):

Personality:

Hobbies:

Skills:

Magic (if applicable):

Weapons (if applicable):

Occupation:

Background History:

And, here's my current character bio.. I might have to edit/change stuff later on as I get more ideas.

General
Name: Jaden
Gender: Male
Age: 22 (Oct. 11)
Race: Human
Orientation: bisexual
Collar: Gray - No sexual play with non-human/super human characters such as wizards, and aliens. Vampires and sexual play with both sexes is okay. No hard torture.

Appearance
Eyes: Green
Hair: Carroty-red, spikey
Build: Lean
Height: 5'10"
Weight: 155 lbs
Voice: tenor

Personality
Jaden is a shy sub with a good sense of humor. Sometimes he appears antisocial because he can't get over his shyness to talk to people, but once he gets to know someone, he would be more talkative. He is always open about his feelings and opinions unless he believes that saying it would hurt someone.

Goal
He is new to BDSM lifestyle and wants to live it out with a master/mistress who will teach him slowly, carefully, and gently, guiding him to discover more about himself.

History
Jaden discovered his submissive tendencies early on in life, as a kid playing with his friends at school, wanting to be the "slave" to the "indian chief", or wanting to be tied up with lariats like Houdini. As he grew older, he found it wasn't just a 'phase' that went away because he still was interested in bondage and the idea of slavery while most of his friends moved on to having a healthy interest in admiring girls.

In his senior year of high school, Jaden's parents passed away unexpectedly in a car crash while they were on vacation. He was left to the care of an aunt for the last year before he wasn't considered a minor anymore. His parents had been of the more conservative sect, and they believed that a person should make their own fortune in life. They left nothing to Jaden except for enough money to send him through college, and willed the remaining money to charity organizations.

Graduating from college with a degree in a computer-related field, he found work at a firm with one of his old friends from highschool. They often had to work together on projects and such, and became close friends - close enough that Jaden revealed some of his ideas to him. The other man remembered something he had heard about a dungeon, and mentioned it to Jaden. Jaden had tried going to a few bondage sessions with professional Dom/mes, but it never seemed to work out, because the Dom/mes just wanted his money.

He decided he would go all out and go to this dungeon that his friend had heard about. He sold all his posessions, and converted the money he had into platinum, which he brought with him.

[Ruby]

Wow! Nicely done everyone.

I'll be dropping these into the FAQ this weekend. You can post them in this thread, send them to me by PM or e-mail.

Jaden - A great form. Guess I best get my own bio/character profile together. Thanks again for your help on the website.

[Jadetiger]

General
Name: Jade
Sex: Female
Age: 29 (Feb. 15)
Occupation: Self employed programmer
Sexual Preference: bisexual
Strengths: Can shape shift into any animal or magical being. She can shield herself using her physic abilities.
Weaknesses: It has only been 3 years since her powers were awakened. She no idea of all her powers or even what they may be.
Collar: Purple - for those of us who look better in purple, but like the meaning of black - anything goes except torture and humiliation. Hard limits – No punching, kicking or cutting unless it is during a fight.

Appearance
Height: 5’2”
Weight: 100
Hair Color: Long light brown. Jade can change her hair color at will.
Eye Color: Green. Jade can change her eye color at will.
Complexion: Fair
Build: Chesty, slender hips
Tattoos/Piercing/Scars/Birthmarks: None yet.

Personality
She is an extremely conflicted woman. She is strong, independent and self-reliant. She is also alone, scared and has a need to be wanted. She has spent her whole life shielding herself and suppressing her physic abilities. She is not a trusting person so she spends a good amount of time alone. She is lonely but would never admit it. She is troubled by the dark fantasies that run through her mind so she suppresses those desires. She is unaware of the all the other abilities she possesses. She is extremely sexual but rarely has sexual contact. Jade has spent her whole life denying the needs that are always in the back of her mind. It terrifies her and she is more afraid of what resides in her than she is of others. Her only friend is a bi-sexual male named Vic. Jade is neither Sub nor Dom but a little of both. Jade’s social skills are lacking. She has a tendency to be blunt. She finds females extremely sensual but doesn’t really relate that to herself. She finds males powerful and dangerous. Jade will have a problem with anyone who tries to control her mind. That is the one thing that truly belongs to her and she will never submit to it being taken away from her. Her more wicked and naughty tendencies will be developed as her character does.

Goal
Jade came to the dungeon to learn about herself and her needs. She is here to explore her Sub and Dom sides.

History
Jade has suffered child abuse from her adopted father and biological father. Her relationship with her mother is complicated because Jade found out her mother knew of the abuse. Jade’s first marriage ended in divorce. Her husband beat and rapes her during the last 7 months of her pregnancy; during this time she would submit and leave her body while he hurt her. Once her daughter was born she took a stand and decided she would rather die than let him hurt her again. After their conflict was complete he never laid a hand on her in violence again. There divorce occurs when he runs off with her daughter for 3 months. Jade locates her daughter, legally claims custody of her and gets rid of the asshole at the ripe old age of 21. She endures further torment when she finds out her ex-husbands brother has been raping her daughter. She has him arrested and he is sent to jail. Jade and her daughter worked through their abuse in counseling. Jade remarries at the age of 23. Her new husband is kind and sweet. He is a gentle giant standing at 6’4 245 pounds. Jade’s family is content and happy for a couple of years then her husband and daughter die in a car accident. She has been wandering for 3 years trying to figured out what was happening to her. She has now mastered control over the powers she knows she has. Her only friend is a bi-sexual male named Vic.

Legend
”What is a Changeling?”, Jade asked again.

”The legends of my people say that the first Changeling was born from a god and a spiritual priestess of an ancient and dead race. The race could take the form of any living thing. They could be the birds in the sky or the beasts of the land, even those animal of the sea or even magical beings. It is said that the priestess had 5 children by the god and hid them all from race. She feared her people would try to destroy her children and she was right. When they found out. Their wizards created creatures call seekers to hunt down and capture her children. They made her watch as they tortured and killed her fours sons, but her sons would not tell them where their sister was hidden. The legend says the woman sent her spirit into the heavens demanding revenge for her children. When her lover spirit arrived the god was so angry he destroyed her whole race including her body, which she had left behind. It is said that the spirit blessed her child with the ability to live many lives before her spirit vanished. It is also said that some of the seekers survived and still look for the girl child. The rest of the legend has been lost over the centuries. But we do know that Apollo gave the barren queen of the Amazons a sleeping girl child which legends say had been asleep of hundreds of years”, concluded the priestess.

”I don’t understand. Are you saying I am a descendant of a god and a priestess or are you saying I am a descendant of the Amazons. This doesn’t make any sense”, Jade grumbled as her rubbed her throbbing temples.

”I am saying you are all three baby girl and that you have lived many lives before”, said the priestess.

”That can’t be. I won’t believe it”, screamed Jade.

[Microwave0ven]

Jaden - A great form. Guess I best get my own bio/character profile together. Thanks again for your help on the website.

No problem, If you ever need help with some of the html stuff, I've got some spare time, and could help out with some of that...

[Ruby]

Jaden/MO - A volunteer - yippee!

Actually putting it in is very easy, I need help with the planning.

Should I put everyone's bio on one long page - or given them each their own?

Suggestions?

[Microwave0ven]

Each their own would be most organized, with links to each person's page from the main page. I can get some graphics work done to make buttons for each person in the color of their collar, if they'd like...

example of my graphics and html work can be found here [best viewed in IE]:
http://momentai.freefronthost.com

Only things working in gallery is the photoshop stuff, and also, yes, i know there are a lot of broken links around. If you encounter a broken link, just hit the back button and try a different link!

[BabySub]

I agree with MO. ::grins cheekily:: I had a longer post written, but he's covered it before I could post. lmao.

[Microwave0ven]

haha, I love the way Lord Mobius keeps twinkies in his pocket... the way I usually keep granola bars in my jacket pocket

[Microwave0ven]

I was bored, so i made some collars, if people like 'em or want to use 'em, go ahead. I just took a picture and did some modifying to it.

[Microwave0ven]

and the rest of them are here.

I didn't do the polka-dotted one because I don't know what colors you want to polka-dot with

[Ruby]

MO,

Very nice collars. The purple one is purrrfect for me.
It just needs a few stars. :-)

Ruby

[BabySub]

Damn Ruby, you're gonna kill my vibe!!!!

Wow. I posted quite a bit tonight as I felt I had to respond to every single thing in there... and I am so damn hot!!!!

You are amazing Ruby... totally amazing. Thank you for making a deep desire come true.

[Jadetiger]

Damn Ruby, you're gonna kill my vibe!!!!

Wow. I posted quite a bit tonight as I felt I had to respond to every single thing in there... and I am so damn hot!!!!

You are amazing Ruby... totally amazing. Thank you for making a deep desire come true.

You are sizzling yourself. I can't wait, between Ruby and you I am starting to melt. Of course in the right place.

[Myya]

Wow!! One heck of a story going on there, been having a bunch of computer problems (( I hate technology sometimes.)) So don't wait up for me

Wish I could thank Yuri properly though oooo, I need to get this fixed asap!

[Ruby]

Thanks BabySub, Jade and Myya for the compliments.

Myya, I'm sure you'll find a way to thank him properly when you get your computer troubles behind you. I, for one, can't wait to read about it.

Thanks to everyone who's had the time to jump in and help out this little bit of story line. I get exciting reading your character's reactions. So perhaps later tonight, after I've done some more work, we'll find out what happens next.

Much later....

[Microwave0ven]

Very nice collars. The purple one is purrrfect for me.
It just needs a few stars. :-)

I'll find a way to put stars on these things..eventually.. no time to spare for now


awww, much later.. Anyway, when i think of roleplay, one of the words that always comes to mind is FUN!!! I'm really enjoying this storyline so far!

[Ruby]

Thank you, Sir Chuck!

This little sub is all heated up and ready to read some more.
You are soooo good at what you do!

Happy to be at your service and mutual pleasure,

Ruby

[Chuckdom19]

Thank you, Sir Chuck!

This little sub is all heated up and ready to read some more.
You are soooo good at what you do!

Happy to be at your service and mutual pleasure,

Ruby

Then I guess I'd better finish it, eh?

[Chuckdom19]

Jade, BabySub, Ruby, your writing is just blowing me away. It is sensuous, hot, and in some places near poetry. You can't find writing this well done in many places.

My spirit is moved with your creations and your mind-pictures. I thank you for finding the time to share your talent with all of us.

Lord Sir Chksng19 (since there's another 'chuck' now)

[littleslut]

Well I got another idea for a plot twist littleslut becomes pregnant (Shock horror!!). Well at the moment it’s only an idea so I would like all you wonderful peoples comments about this. How practical do you think it would be to write in as a plot? Any other suggestions and any offers to be the lucky Daddy!

Thanks in advance for you input

ls
xxx

[Mobius]

Well I got another idea for a plot twist littleslut becomes pregnant (Shock horror!!). Well at the moment it’s only an idea so I would like all you wonderful peoples comments about this. How practical do you think it would be to write in as a plot? Any other suggestions and any offers to be the lucky Daddy!

Thanks in advance for you input

ls
xxx

While the Idea of a Forced pregancy is hot erotic and kinky. Then we have the problem of what to do with the resulting baby/child. While I am not above fantasicing about a little incest. I am not real comfortible with children in erotic situations. Perhaps we send the fetus to a swiss boarding school and she (of course it is a she) comes back when she is 17 and very nobile.
Beware the alian he has designs on inter species mating. (no I am not going to write that)

[littleslut]

The one way around that that I can see is for me to leave the dungeon only to come back for visits and maybe a bit of free babysitting . In essence gaining trustee status after the birth.

That objection aside, are there any other points that anyone can think of that would prevent me writing this unless of course there is somebody who strongly disagrees with this the I wont carry on.

ls x

[Ruby]

Hi LittleSlut,

While I prefer to think that we're all on birth control in the dungeon,
if you want to have a baby, I have no objections. Like Mobius, I don't want to see a child in the dungeon. Nobody under 18 should be visiting, let alone living there. Incest is also out for me. My vamps may be connected by blood, but not by birth. :-)

I do suggest that someone volunteer to be the father of your virtual child or that you let a character that's non-real have the honors - like the alien, Dracubus, etc. You can always do the mystical pregnancy, where the baby is born and ages to a full grown adult in less than a year. And as the mother of that character, he/she would be another extension of you, so you would be responsible for the care, feeding and well being of this new person.

Please give everyone a few days to think about and comment on your plot twist before you write it into the storyline. We'll be interest in your ideas as they solidify.

What a delightful soap opera the dungeon has become. I look forward to each new adventure.

[Jadetiger]

The one way around that that I can see is for me to leave the dungeon only to come back for visits and maybe a bit of free babysitting . In essence gaining trustee status after the birth.

That objection aside, are there any other points that anyone can think of that would prevent me writing this unless of course there is somebody who strongly disagrees with this the I wont carry on.

ls x

Littleslut,
I have to be honest. This makes me a little uncomfortable for a lot of different reasons. I am quite aware that this is all fantasy but as long as you keep the fantasy child safe and from harm my reason don't really matter. This is a place for fantasies and I can deal with it. And I would love to babysit for you.
I must admit this reply has brought me back down to earth. I have to thank you, maybe now I can get some work done.

Hugs and Kisses.
Jade

[Mobius]

Since every one in the dungeon is vampirehead. Would the child end up like the little vampire that was in interview with a vampire.

Were she is bitten at the young age of 7 and has to stay that way.

Probly not a good Idea. I dont want the dungeon to be a den of pediphiles.
Maybe you go through a prolonged pregnancy and then you give birth. Then you come across the wizard or the alian and zot she is 18 and ready to be inslaved. Of course the mother would be incharge of the daughter and help in her training. (Sorry I like lesbian incest ) Some may not. As long as it is over the age of consent I do not see a problem with it. Not like the daughter is going to get pregged like if it was father daughter.

Lets not get into a discussion on the pros and cons of incest as I would surly lose.

Just remember this is a vertual dungeon. It is not real people.

[BabySub]

Aaannnd Ruby does it again. LOL. This is costing me a fortune in batteries, never mind finger power!

Jade, I've been meaning to pm you for a while now and tell you how much I'm enjoying your posts. :: wink wink, nudge nudge :: Heh. They're damn awesome, and I can't wait to read them when I see you've posted. Please carry on. (as long as you don't mind me using Yuri now and then, lol)

Sir Chksng, you flatter me. All I'm doing is replying to Ruby's posts, responding to what her amazing mind comes up with. So far. Just gimme a night alone with Yuri, and I'll see what I can dream up. I'm loving you and Ruby just now. Can I get my hands on her too..? :: plots ::

Littleslut, I'm not gonna say one way or the other regarding your story idea. I don't hate it, but I don't like it either. How's that for non-committal? LOL. I wouldn't be overly comfortable with a baby/child in the dungeon, but could be ok with a baby/child growing up quickly thanks to magic or whatever. Not sure.

I've not had much chance or energy to post elsewhere in the board lately, but this has all grabbed me by the pussy and forced me to submit to it.

:: goes to try and bring life to her vibe ::

[littleslut]

Ok well it seems that the general consensus is against it so ill scrap that idea.

Well thanks to everyone for there input and if I come up with any more ideas then ill make sure to run it before you guys

ls x