I see

[STONE'sSLUT]

Yeah - not sure I'd really call this EROTIC, but wasn't sure where to put it, so decided to play it safe. Disclaimer: this isn't about anyone at this site...at least who will mind that I've posted about Him *smiles*

I See

Your eyes shift, your face a mask
Each time I speak the truth:
“Yes, Sir - I need the pain.”
And I see the darkness there
Knowing that you will react
Flaying the flesh from my bones in your mind
Then taking a piece of me with each stroke
The cane whirs through the air
Each “SNAP” a caress
That bruises & scars the white skin
Leaving a reminder for me
To know who is King.

One day, I saw something else
In those eyes that reveal so much;
As tears marked my face
And your tools of pleasure/pain
Marked me as yours, grabbing my hair
And demanding that I cum for you
As only you can make me.
The mask fell that day
Revealing your elation at receiving my gift
Knowing I was more open to you
As your friend, your wife, your submissive
Than ever before
And we both knew who was King.

Today, I see you as a man.
Before not a boy, but not yet my man
And I am honored
That you have chosen to bless me
With your control & love.
Today, I see you as my husband.
Before in law, but not yet a partner
And I am honored
That you have chosen to join me
In discovery & growth.
Today, I see you as my Dom.
Before just a lover, but not yet yourself
And I am honored
That you have chosen to give me
Your patience & domination.
And I know you are my King.

[Rhabbi]

Very nice STONE'sSLUT, thank you.

[STONE'sSLUT]

Thanks, Rhabbi.

[jeanne]

That's really, really good - thanks for sharing it with us. (and I'd definitely call it erotic )

[STONE'sSLUT]

*giggles* thanks

[Arria]

I love it.

[~faerie~]

That was beautiful! Thank you.

[Baddbaddgirl]

beautiful.. erotic and sensual.. very well written.