A Mother's Love

[twitch]

This was a painful poem to put to paper, and it's taken a lot out of me to write it out.

Maybe I was wrong
Maybe you were right
Maybe it doesn't matter
Please don't start a fight

Don't push it any further
Just to see where it will go
I'm on the verge of breaking down
The end so very close

I tried to see the light
I tried to make it good
I died to make you happy
But you never understood

A mother's love is special
Except when tainted with fear
All those years you lost control
My screams you refused to hear

So now you sit and wonder
What could you have done so wrong
The answer you seek within your head
You've known it all along

[fallenstar]

-hugs- good poem hun....

[snowflake]

Tears fall once again when i read these words hun,
this is not how a mother should treat their son.
How can she even think of acting this way,
i pray for her that she will see one day.

The hurt she causes each time she does this,
and will see the love she kills and will miss.
Then it will be her loss with no one to blame,
then your pain she will finally feel the same.

Holds you close being a mom to some,
hoping that some pain i may numb.
Kissing you gentle to let you know,
that other love you very much so.

We may not be your mom but we truly care,
and we feel the pain that you so deeply bare.
i hope you know that hun down deep in your heart,
and we are here for you no matter how far apart.

hugs snow

[Warbaby1943]

This was a painful poem to put to paper, and it's taken a lot out of me to write it out.

Maybe I was wrong
Maybe you were right
Maybe it doesn't matter
Please don't start a fight

Don't push it any further
Just to see where it will go
I'm on the verge of breaking down
The end so very close

I tried to see the light
I tried to make it good
I died to make you happy
But you never understood

A mother's love is special
Except when tainted with fear
All those years you lost control
My screams you refused to hear

So now you sit and wonder
What could you have done so wrong
The answer you seek within your head
You've known it all along

Powerful, very powerful. Thank you

[fallenstar]

good poem...

[The Tester`]

Twitch... Very good at conveying your thoughts... Extreamly painful and hard to do sometimes... There is no replacement for a Mom... But remember that there are others who do care, listen and share...

Snow... Excelent... Get's your point across well... Shows your caring and comittment to your friendship clearly...

Thanks to both of you for sharing...