Slut4U first writting assigment

[Slut4U]

First Writing Assignment

I walk up onto the deck of the cruise ship bound for the Caribbean, where they are holding a dance, wearing a short black skirt, showing of my long tanned legs, and a low cut white shirt so my voluptuous breast are in plain view. It’s a beautiful clear evening, somewhat on the chilly side so anyone looking closely can notice my hard nipples. On my way to the bar to get a drink I observe a very attractive man across the dance floor looking my way. I flash him a huge smile while ordering a Mudslide. I decide to finish my drink and dance a little before I approach him.
He crosses the dance floor walking straight towards me. When he reaches me he says come get a drink with me. I obey and follow him, instead of stopping by the bar, he continues past the bar. When we get out of view of everyone, he grabs my wrist and pushes me into a dark room.
“Where are we? I thought you wanted to get a drink?” I say as I hear him lock the door. He turns to me, pushes me down onto the floor and says “shut up. You will be punished for not coming to me when you noticed me.”

[Aesop]

First Writing Assignment

I walk up onto the deck of the cruise ship bound for the Caribbean, where they are holding a dance, wearing a short black skirt, showing of my long tanned legs, and a low cut white shirt so my voluptuous breast are in plain view. It’s a beautiful clear evening, somewhat on the chilly side so anyone looking closely can notice my hard nipples. On my way to the bar to get a drink I observe a very attractive man across the dance floor looking my way. I flash him a huge smile while ordering a Mudslide. I decide to finish my drink and dance a little before I approach him.
He crosses the dance floor walking straight towards me. When he reaches me he says come get a drink with me. I obey and follow him, instead of stopping by the bar, he continues past the bar. When we get out of view of everyone, he grabs my wrist and pushes me into a dark room.
“Where are we? I thought you wanted to get a drink?” I say as I hear him lock the door. He turns to me, pushes me down onto the floor and says “shut up. You will be punished for not coming to me when you noticed me.”

Not bad at all Slut. I would have liked to see more descriptions of the deck of the ship. How was it lit? Was it crowded? Things like that. Your description of the man could have been more specific as well. Overall I enjoyed it and want to know what happens next.

I'll pm your next assignment soon.

[Slut4U]

Well next time I will make sure that I am more descriptive. I cant wait for my next assignment
Slut4U