I submitted my first story...

[mollydoll]

Hello everyone!
I submitted my first chapter to the BDSM library. It's called Mella's Obsession, check it out and let me know what you honestly think. I have 3 1/2 chapters finished so far so let me know if I should continue and what your thoughts are.

Thanks so much E/everyone!
mollydoll

[JimmyJump]

Hello everyone!
I submitted my first chapter to the BDSM library. It's called Mella's Obsession, check it out and let me know what you honestly think. I have 3 1/2 chapters finished so far so let me know if I should continue and what your thoughts are.

Thanks so much E/everyone!
mollydoll

Congratulations!

I must say I liked the story, though it could have been worked-out a bit more.
The writing itself is more than promising, so, keep on going, you're doing fine


JJ