Quote Originally Posted by Ruby
If I've changed some vital bit of info, misspelled a word or two, just tell me and I'll do my best to correct it ASAP.
Great job Ruby. I know it's impossible to edit something you've read several times. Here's the advantage of fresh eyes:

Lord Sir Chuck, last paragraph: "mental powers from a sharing more than a kiss". First "a" should be deleted.

Darkgirl, last paragraph: "tame her is to brake her". Should be "break".

Jade, history: "Her husband beat and rapes". Should be "raped".
Jade, history: "There divorce occurs when he runs". Should be "Their divorce occurs after..."
Jade, history: "wandering for 3 years trying to figured out". Should be "figure out".
Jade, legend: "they tortured and killed her fours sons". Should be "four".

Jaden, history: The last paragraph is a repeat and can be deleted.

"Mary (Teni aka truckinnhors)" should be "truckinnhorsin"

Myra: "left at the alter". Should be "altar".
Myra: "Mildar has dealt with her one more". Should be "on".

Quote Originally Posted by Ruby
Perhaps a lurker who's always wanted to play with us...
Your invitation is very tempting. Maybe next time when I have more time available.