Quote Originally Posted by Microwave0ven
curious about this:

Dracubius - "Evil, Sadistic, Julius, frankly mean..." what's "julius"? is it supposed to be 'jealous'? Also, the capitalization here could be changed (ie. Sadistic -> sadistic)


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Mildar
"Anaged supernatural" should be "An aged supernatural"
"potions some times with" should be "potions sometimes with"
"If you come to his door be prepared to answer 3 questions." insert comma after "door"
"If you get them right he will reward you. If you get them wrong he will punish you." insert comma after "right" and "wrong"

Do we really need a Spell Nazi in the dungeon.

This is suppose to be a free and easy writing exorcise. It is suppose to be fun.
enough of the critiques K