Extremely well written. Excellent command of language and 'tempo.' I was impressed with the author's willingness to devote the whole first chapter to setting up the scenario and introducing the main character, without getting too much into the actual action.

The second chapter begins the subjects subjugation and again, the author seems in no rush to hurry the action or 'do everything at once.' A step here and a step there.

If the content was more to my taste, I would put it on my bookshelf and be on the watch for updates.