We are not asking you to move on, gogo.
While it was a very entertaining story, I think that many people were questioning the validity of it and your motives. As for as stories go, it was an interesting tale and probably partly so because of a few real life experiences.
I think perhaps why it got the response that it did was because, as had been said, it was posted in the "My BDSM Life" section of the forums where we discuss real life concerns of those who are interested in BDSM. It would have been eagerly accepted in either Sexual Fantasy or perhaps Story Ideas.
Please, by all means continue to post, though perhaps maybe take a look around and see what sort of thing is posted where. We are always looking for new members for our little community.