Great story. Very well done. Only error I found was that the bulge should have neen in his groin, not in his groan. (Although that was funny too)
Great story. Very well done. Only error I found was that the bulge should have neen in his groin, not in his groan. (Although that was funny too)
There are currently 1 users browsing this thread. (0 members and 1 guests)