Quote Originally Posted by MsUther
Oh oh oh! Lovely taunting start this is Citizen Cane. My fingers itch to get to know what more is to come Sigh.

I liked the plot and the pace and how you juggeled the point of view between the people in the story. I got thrown right into the scene and as mentioned... I am eager to read more.

Thanks for sharing this with us
Thank you so much MsUther. It's nice to receive support. We will respond in kind when we get accustomed to the forum. Love your avatar by the way, very erotic.
Thanks again
Cane