And to be a little bit honest - I liked the story I wrote. It was my first try and I'm not a writer by any means. Heck, English is not even my first language.
However, I have been reading stories since...well, let's just say that "To Obey" had only 1000000 chapters back then . :-) Some I liked, some I didn't. So finally I got the nerve to write a story. It was actually more like a dare to myself if I have the nerve to do it. Would I really dare to send such an intimate story for everyone to read ?

So I did it, yay for me ! I'm a brave little toaster. But it turns out , I can't write a coherent sentence. My writing is abusive to people. I would like to apologize , I never meant to offend anyone. I now realize that writing is taken very seriously on this website and will stick to reading, not writing. However my writing style is not something I can change, I don't know where my mistakes lie, grammar wise. For me to start writing perfectly, I'd have to go back to school and seriously study English.

So anyway, why this confession ? I don't think I will write anymore chapters, I don't belong in a writer's circle and it was a failed try to act as one.
And it was a little bit embarrasing to find out what people really though about my story, I personally can't wait until this site is updated and my story will be on it's way to obscurity and off the front page :-)

Thanks to everyone who read it and to people who posted reviews. As embarrassing as it was, constructive criticism has never hurt anyone ( although baccaccio - you did make me cry :-))

Nadia