Nadia, if you're next chapter is as charming and technically correct as your note here, I'll be more than happy to revise the review. Not that you will need me to, because you will probably have several other glowing reviews to help you forget this one unfortunate one. :-)Originally posted by Nadia
So anyway, why this confession ? I don't think I will write anymore chapters, I don't belong in a writer's circle and it was a failed try to act as one.
And it was a little bit embarrasing to find out what people really though about my story, I personally can't wait until this site is updated and my story will be on it's way to obscurity and off the front page :-)
Thanks to everyone who read it and to people who posted reviews. As embarrassing as it was, constructive criticism has never hurt anyone ( although baccaccio - you did make me cry :-))
Nadia
And if English is not your first language, I tip my hat to you for your courage in trying your hand at this. No one has written the perfect story yet; we're all floundering in the same sea.
Boccaccio