Really good imagery and flow, Echoes!
It's interesting that the last stanza has a much different feel (longer lines, different word choice, less linear). I'm still trying to decide if I like it or not :P but it made the ending have a strong impact.
Really good imagery and flow, Echoes!
It's interesting that the last stanza has a much different feel (longer lines, different word choice, less linear). I'm still trying to decide if I like it or not :P but it made the ending have a strong impact.
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