Thank you ElectricBadger, I am not sure if I like it either...in this poem.
Sometimes I find I have two poems in one or the start of another and I wonder if this could be the case.
It's as if my mind wants to go but I shut it down quickly![]()
I think taking out the last stanza and leaving first poem as is would be complete for one dream
...and explore this second possibility to see where it leads.






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