Excellent--a juxtaposition of simple real life and edgy tormented fantasy, all coming together in a deliciously erotic manner and ending on a sweet and haunting note.

I especially like the use of those very short sharp sentences. To me, it gave the scenes incredible intensity and feelings of urgency.

Being super nit picky, I would have liked to have seen more 'wolf-like' adjectives used in the prologue, e.g. "crouch" rather than "sit", but that's perhaps just a personal preference.