Writing a story takes a lot out of a person.

[petpleasureyes]

i do agree with you whole heartedly. One of the biggest things i tried to express in my story was the emotions that i experienced as a slave being used this way. It was very difficult for me to post such a story about myself, but i do think it was well worth the effort and do intend to post other stories in the future. i hope there are people out there who are eagerly awaiting me to do this. Thanks again for replying.
slave gary

[Dr Mabeuse]

One thing you might really consider doing is posting a request for feedback and opinion at the end or the beginning of the story.

I've posted a lot of stuff at Literotica.com, which has an awful lot of members. Still, only about 0.1% (one out of a thousand) bother to vote on a story, and in my own experience a story will generate maybe 2-5 pieces of real feedback before it sinks beneath the waves.

If not that, then maybe we should consider posting a sticky or creating another board where authors can specifically ask for feedback and stories can be discussed. Or you can always ask me. I'm pretty tough, but I'm fair too, and I like reviewing stories.

---dr.M.

[petpleasureyes]

Thanks for replying. If you want, check out my story and review it. By the way, i've always enjoyed reading "Kublai Khan." It's a shame R.L. Stevenson interupted Coleridge before he could finish it.