Well I am pleased to see that our greeting service is working as it should!

to forums Eric and congratulations on having posted your first story. It takes a lot of courage to expose a 'baby' to the public like that; I fear that although you may get many many readers only a few people will bother to give you feedback, but please don't be discouraged - this unfortunately is normal, and even our most experienced of writers complain about it. You might wish to think about joining the writers' block - it is a good place for further refining your skills in a supportive environment.

cariad