I'm the co-author (well, principal writer) of 'Missy's Misfortune' which is a series about a girl abducted by a group of women, auctioned off to one of them and subsequently abused by them.

Most of the reviews were favourable, which is of course nice but I got really pissed off by one review in particular.

It picked me up on lots of what I'd consider little things such as how many cctv cameras in Malls, how a PC engineer would easily find out that someone's pc had been infected by a virus etc. But seemed to blithely accept the biggest work of fiction in the story; namely that there is a group of professional women who go around abducting teenage girls.

Did make me wonder exactly what the reviewer reads stories for.