Well done Panther!

I have to start by saying that I remember watching Three's company and could picture the characters in my head while I was reading. That was very cool!

I liked the humour that was in the story, despite the more extreme nature of it. To me, a good story is all about the emotions it generates in the reader, and this certainly achieved that goal.

I found only a few minor errors -- I instead of 'a' in this phrase "So I guy skips one cooking glass " and the word her was not needed in this sentence "She screamed into the gag as his forearm started to make its way into her your poor ravaged pussy. " These are not anything at all to be concerned about, and would have been found by the grammer checker and or a further edit.

This sentence "Lana groaned around the gag as she felt her pussy lips tearing under the onslaught and felt on the brink of passing out from the pain when the first strike across her left breast from the crop brought her mind back into sharp focus.", could be made into two sentences. Again this is not a big deal, and is just a personal choice.

Overall, Panther, you did a great job and I am sure I am not the only one who would be interested in reading more of this story.

How did it feel to not use a spell/grammar check?

I look forward to reading more of your work, and when you are ready, you can move onto the next assignment.

Thanks for getting back into the assignments after your big move. I hope you are feeling more at home each day.

Aussiegirl