Your powerful alliteration makes me wonder...oh, does it make me wonder.
Could an entire passage of prose be written as such? Hmm...
To revive the issue of annoying reviews (as that is the thread title), what makes even a positive review annoying? Is that a common happening? Just curious. You author types may be willing to shed some light on the annoying subject perhaps?
Respectfully submitted-
tessa
(As a by the way, say 'annoying' 8 or 9 times in a row. You will understand why the word has the meaning it does.)