Quote Originally Posted by soledesire
Jaeangel:The correct spelling of 'coleric' is 'choleric'.

Oh, thank you. That was SO bothering me.


Jaeangel: "I am direct and frank because unfortunately I seem to have overestimated some part of this audience." 'part' indicates an individual/singular, and 'audience' implies a number of individuals. Therefore, in order to be grammatically correct, it shoud read, "...I seem to have overestimated some members of this audience."

Now see, what I got was "I am direct and frank because, unfortunately, I seem to have overestimated..." I didn't really catch the number agreement issue.

On paragraph 3, I am a big fan of using the semicolon for contrast, as in "Here, we can't be direct as among adults; here, we applaud everyone for everything they do..."

And for paragraph 4, I just wondered why the writer would think you were seeking his kudos. But then, I'm new here.

s/d (who may still be learning this sub thing but, by gosh, the girl can punctuate)
Paragraph 4: I wasn't saying kudos, to him, I was quoting what he'd written in his post. But thank you, soledesire. Yes, I did miss those other points you mentioned. As I said at the bottom of that post you quoted, I'm not perfect. I'd be the first one to admit that. The entire reason for that post was to introduce Master514 to the fact that he isn't perfect, either. And therefore he should pay attention to the content of the post, not its spelling, diction, or grammar.
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